Thursday, 22 October 2020

Eng7/10 Oct 22

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Good morning.

We’ll get started at 11.

 

Today’s agenda:

 

1.   Review quiz

2.   Animal Farm Ch 7

3.   Test Ch4-6

4.   HW  Read Ch7, make notes

 

Friday – Pro D – no school for you

Monday - Animal Farm Ch 7

Tuesday - Animal Farm Ch 8

Wednesday - Animal Farm Ch 9

Thursday - Animal Farm Ch 10

Friday – essay on Animal Farm

 

Next week, we will be learning about five-paragraph essays

 

 

 

Quiz-email it to me by 12:00

Some people are getting their quizzes in late. Due at 12:00

A few minutes grace.

Some people are waiting until the last possible minute.

Give yourself enough to make sure the test will be in on time.

 

Write a sentence that includes the quoted material for three of these, just like we did in class:

e.g. Old Major – “wise and benevolent”(1)

The animals respected Old Major because he was “wise and benevolent.”(1)

 

 Choose three out of the six:

1.    Clover - “bunches of ribbon”(31)

2.    Snowball - “brilliant speeches”(31)

3.    Napoleon - “support for himself”(31)

4.    windmill - “electrical power”(32)

5.    dogs - “snapping jaws”(35)

6.    Squealer - “very sly”(39)

 

Share some of your examples in chat if you wish:

1.   Clover was very smart because she silently found “bunches of ribbon”(31) hidden under the straw.

2.   Clover found Mollie’s secret that she hid some “bunches of ribbon”(31) and sugar which evidence her guess that Mollie met some men.

Clover found Mollie’s secret that she hid some “bunches of ribbon”(31) and sugar which provided evidence to back up her guess that Mollie met some men.

 

3.   Snowball studied how to build a windmill from the book he found in the farmhouse in order to get "electrical power" (32).

4.   Snowbal think the “electrical power’’ that wimdmill make can bring a lots of benefits  to the animal and help everyone work less.

Snowball thinks the “electrical power’’(32) that the windmill makes can bring a lots of benefits to the animals and help everyone work less.

 

Sentences with lots of little errors will not get big marks.

2/6 not 6/6

 

5.   Snowball was a smart pig in the farm, and he convinced everyone with his "brilliant speeches" (31). COMPOUND

 

6.   Snowball and Napoleon always disagreed with each other; however, Snowball “has brilliant speeches”(31) that is why he always won against Napoleon. 0/2 RO

Snowball and Napoleon always disagreed with each other; however, Snowball had “brilliant speeches”(31); that is why he always won against Napoleon. 2/2

7.   The windmill is the highest point on the farm; furthermore, it can be used to generate an “electrical power”(32). punc

is the highest point on the farm Meaning?

0/2

 

** The quality of the sentences is dropping off. Some of you are forgetting about sentences.

Every sentence that you write has to be one of these:

SIMPLE

COMPOUND

COMPLEX

COMPOUND COMPLEX

 

We have done so much work on sentences that you have lots of notes to go back and review.

 

The sentence work is absolutely critical.

It will be the foundation of all of your academic work.

 

sentence combining exercises-

 

Email you an exercise – try them for homework

 

 

 

 

 

Question 4 on the test.

 

Napoleon says that he can detect Snowball’s presence everywhere, and whenever something appears to go wrong by chance, Snowball receives the blame.

 

plagiarism – usually students just cut and paste text

 

No school tomorrow for you.

See you Monday.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Test #6

Email it to me by 12:15.

 

Paragraph test on Chapters 4-6

No quotations necessary. Try some if you wish.

 

Choose one topic:

1.   Are the animals following Old Major’s vision? Why or why not?

OR

2.   Is Napoleon an effective leader? Why or why not?


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