EF 3/4 descriptive writing

descriptive paragraph - 5 senses , focused on sight

how it looked

ocean
mountian
trees, bushes
people

adjectives, descriptive words


narrative - "I visited a beach."
I, I I can see 

Avoid "I"

Topic sentence:
This is a beautiful beach on a sunny day.
There is a lovely beach in what looks like a tropical paradise.