EF2/3 Sentence combining

1. Jim likes pizza. Ann likes pizza.

COMBINE THE TWO SENTENCES INTO ONE SENTENCE

Jim likes pizza. Ann likes pizza.

Ann - new information
likes pizza - repeated information

Jim and Ann likes pizza. XXX
Jim and Ann like pizza. SIMPLE

Jim likes pizza, and Ann likes pizza. COMPOUND

2. Abby plays soccer every weekend.
Luis plays soccer every weekend.

Carl plays soccer every weekend.

Abby plays soccer every weekend.
Luis Carl - new information

Abby, Luis and Carl plays soccer every weekend. XXX

Abby, Luis, and Carl play soccer every weekend.
SIMPLE

Abby plays soccer every weekend, and Luis plays soccer every weekend, so Carl plays soccer every weekend. XXX POOR WRITING

CONCISE, SHORT, ALL THE INFORMATION