1. The deserted streets surrounded the seventeen-story-high building where the supervisor who was directing the leveling blew a shrill, high whistle; then the technician who was in charge of blasting sent the electric signal that ignited the explosives.
She is a six-year-old girl.
She is a six years old girl. XXX
That is a grocery store.
That is a groceries store. XXX
2. Billowing dust clouds rose ...
Clouds of bollowing dust rose in all directions form ground level.
3. The clouds enveloped the lower floors and reached out toward the onlookers in other buildings.
4. At first, the structure seemed unaffected by the blast; then it trembled slightly before gently sliding straight downward into the dust cloud.
5. The echoing explosion which could be heard miles away shook nearby windows and stunned cringing onlookers.
6. Workers, police, and onlookers cheered, waved their arms, and smiled at each other when the dust settled, revealing a mountain made of broken bricks and twisted steel.
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