Friday, 3 June 2016

E12 CC 30m essay

point by point

INTRO PARAGRAPH
BODY 1,2,3
CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH
300 w

GRABBER- written last
Islands can be retreats, but they can also be prisons. The narrators in “I Am a Rock” and “No Man is an Island” have very different feelings about their places in society.
Although both are written in first person point-of-view, the “Rock” narrator is completely inward-looking whereas the “Island” narrator is outward-looking. For example, while the “Rock” narrator speaks only about himself and his own feelings, the “Island” narrator extends his thoughts to include the reader. He talks about “thee” and “thine”, meaning ‘you’ and ‘your’. The “Rock” narrator talks only about himself as in when he says “I touch no one”.
Another obvious contrast is the narrators’ use of the word ‘island’. They both use the word to mean a body of land separated from the mainland in a geographical sense. Also, both use it as a metaphor for an individual’s relationship to greater humanity. However, they have opposite understandings of how human beings can exist within a larger society. The “Rock” narrator claims to be an island in a metaphorical sense, and the “Island” narrator knows that a human being cannot be an island ”entire of itself”. The first has the island for protection and self-preservation; the second sees the island as an impossible place for a person to survive alone.
The most compelling contrast is the narrators’ diametric views on their place within society. The “Rock” narrator has “no need of friendship”, yet the “Island” narrator is “involved in mankind.” The “Rock” narrator uses an image of separation in the “fortress” surrounded by “walls”; the “Island” narrator, on the other hand, evokes an image of community in the “the bell” which rings from a church steeple- am ancient symbol of communion and gathering.

In the end, the “Rock” narrator purports to be alone while the “Island” narrator revels in his humanity. The “Rock” narrator is in a city however- how long will continue to separate himself from others when he gets hungry and there is no food in his fridge. CLINCHER

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