Monday, 26 October 2015

EF7/ E10 Air Show sentence combining possible solutions

SENTENCES- SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX
comprehension-
Air Show
1. The air show attracts locals. KERNEL
The air show attracts thousands of locals and tourists, so the show grows bigger every year. COMPOUND
The air show, which grows bigger every year, attracts thousands of locals and tourists. COMPLEX
2. Screaming jets fly low overhead in teams as pilots display their skills.
Pilots display their skills by flying their screaming jets in teams low and overhead.
Teams of pilots display their skills by flying their screaming jets low and overhead.
3. Cringing adults watch in awe while some crying children cover their ears; nevethless, they want to see more. COMPOUND COMPLEX
Cringing adults who are watching in awe and some crying children who are covering their ears want to see more.
Cringing adults watching in awe and some crying children covering their ears want to see more.
On one hand, cringing adults watch in awe while some crying children cover their ears; on the other hand, they want to see more.
4. Skydivers float gently down to earth from 1000 metres up; they guide their falls and land on a white cross.
Skydivers who float gently down to earth from 1000 metres up guide their falls to land on a white cross.
5. Biplanes which are imitations of early aircraft engage in fights that are typical of WW1.
Biplanes, imitations of early aircraft, engage in fights typical of WW1.


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