Thursday, 27 November 2014

English 11 Incorporate quoted material into sentences

Poh Poh does not like to show affection to Jook Liang: “elbowed away”. (33) NOT INCORPORATED

Jook-Liang tried to give her grandma a hug, but Poh Poh “elbowed [her] away”. (33)
INCORPORATED- PART OF YOUR SENTENCE

Jook-Liang tries to give her grandma a hug, but the little girl is “elbowed away” (33) by Poh Poh. INCORPORATED- SIMPLER

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