EF3 Sent Comb French Fries & Coffee

1.   White french fries are loaded into a wire basket.

1.   The white French fries are loaded into a basket that is made of wire.

1.   PASSIVE VOICE

The wire basket is loaded with white French fries.

2.   Then they are slowly lowered slowly into oil.

3.   Their hot bath crackles and foams.

4.   The thinly-sliced potatoes release a puff of steam.

5.   They come out crispy brown and streaked with oil.

1.   He sips at his coffee cup that is chipped along the rim.

2.   The taste is bitter, acidic, and faintly soapy.

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The taste is bitter, acidic and faintly soapy.

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3.   There is a brown film on the inside of his cup.

4.   He takes extra care so that he doesn’t spill any on his clothes.

5.   He takes extra care not to spill any on his clothes.

MODEL: I try not to eat too much chocolate.

6.   He is afraid that it might eat holes in the material.

He is afraid that the coffee might eat holes in his clothes.